I frequently judge a story’s beauty on its ability to evoke
feelings, because it seems to be that the greatest challenge in fiction is to
create genuine feeling in the audience. Logic is easy, it can be planned and
follows a pattern but emotion has to be organic, something that is much more
difficult to fabricate. Pantaloon in Black managed to evoke some intense
emotions, the two of which I thought were most powerfully written were grief and
disgust.
Faulkner’s descriptions of grief are subtle and so well
written that the reader has to take a step back from the novel to realize that
it’s even happening. As Rider is walking back from the funeral he talks about
looking at the wagon tracks on the path that “somewhere beneath them, vanished
but not gone, fixed and held in the annealing dust, the narrow, splay-toed
prints of his wife’s bare feet…”That single line sums up the entire process of
grieving a loved one, of looking at time passing on after their absence, of
knowing that they are no longer present but realizing deep down that they aren’t
gone and never will be. The grieving process of course continues and the reader
just gets sucked in along with him, we feel everything that Rider feels because
the way Faulkner describes it, it evokes memories of our own grief.
The feeling of disgust is not so much guided by carefully structured
empathy but by showing the exceptional ignorance and hatred of racism. We didn’t
read my favorite passage in class, and looking at it I realized that taken out
of context it makes me look like a racist myself. However, the passage I found
to be one of the best in the story was the Sheriff telling his wife that he is
done with “Them niggers…Because they aint human. The look like a man…but when it
comes to normal human feelings and sentiments of human beings, they might just
as well be a damn herd of wild buffaloes.” That passage caused my heart to
shrivel up and my stomach bubble with that sick feeling you get when you look
at the wounded puppies on those awful Humane Society commercials. The sheriff was
so WRONG. Beyond being morally wrong Faulkner had just shown how much “them
niggers” felt, how much Rider grieved Mannie, how much he cared and how truly
human he was. I’m not sure if Faulkner was a part of any civil rights activism,
but this piece is a really subtle slap in the face to all of those ignorant
racist comments. It’s brilliantly executed. This was by far my favorite work we have read
in this class
There's a giant Othering going on here, Faulkner making familiar an experience for us, but also strongly pushing us ouside of it. ("Look out, White folks...")
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